Peeking out of my window, a faithful friend beckoned me.
“Come visit today," she seemed to say.
So reaching and grabbing my jacket so dusty,
Gaily, I waved and went slipping away.
Enjoying the company one of the other,
“Oh, help me, please,” silent eyes did plead.
So pitiful her imploring was, I scarcely could recover,
I decided right then, I could help my friend, help her to be freed.
Touching her fingers to wild, messy tresses,
“Could you, would you, help me please?
So tangled and matted and tattered and knotted," Oh, how she stresses!
I’ll do my best to fix this mess, I answered with unease.
Running to go, to grab what's needed,
“Don’t be long,” she exclaimed and pleaded.
So knowing how quickly I’d return, her words I never heeded.
I found the things so very quick, my task was soon competed.
Beginning to comb, this way and that, from every side and angle,
“Ouch! Be careful. You're hurting me," she whimpered and did whine.
So gently I pulled, I pulled at the mats, I tugged at the tangles;
I snipped at the snags; I combed at the locks 'til beauty did shine.
Gathering dead and damaged hair,
“I'm feeling so much better,” the happy chorus refraining.
So I walked all around to inspect the repair,
I smiled to myself with my pride never waning.
Whistling cheerfully, strolling back home,
“Thank you, oh, thank you,” came floating along.
So I pondered how glorious my yard to behold,
and heard all the chirping,
the rustling of leaves,
the joyful, the jubilant
song of the spring.
©Barbara J. Donaldson, 2020. All rights reserved
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Oh, that’s a wonderful poem! I was intrigued from the beginning, given the times we’re living in, and it wasn’t until the sixth stanza that I started to smile a suspecting smile. Thank you for sharing this–it was a bright spot in a lesson-planning-preparing day!
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Thanks for the kind comments. I’m glad it took you a while to figure it out and that it made you smile.
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Love the way you created a sense of mystery at the start. Well done!
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I really enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme of your poem! What fun to read!
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Such a clever idea and a great poem to explain it!
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Thanks. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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